The Master Puppeteer's Slave

to icemagix2450 you obviously don't know what you're talking about. While George Orwell does an incredible job of representing a world ruled by manipulation and government chaos, Savy's poem manages to portray pain and agony in a different light. It is more likely that the work of the young writer, Savy, is a reflection on her own inner turmoil, and therefore the parallels she has drawn cannot be related to the Orwell work to which you refer. Her own pain and suffering has nothing to do with what George Orwell was writing about. As for any grammatical or spelling errors, the writer of this work is young and I have every confidence that given time she will learn to pay more attention to those little things. The basic point at issue here is Savy's talent, which is incredible in one of her age. She has an empathy and a style that is rarely achieved by many older and more experienced writers. The fact that she has the courage to put her thoughts down on paper and then share them with others is commendable. On the other hand, you, icemagix2450, should be ashamed for trying to quell a young creative mind with your nasty drivvel.